Monday 20 February 2012

Animatic Feedback




1.             Very good, clear drawings, sounds are well done and don’t clash and there are appropriate sounds for things such as a typewriter. However I think the titles should be in a different font and not in pink

2.             Credits need to appear for longer


3.             Really like the typing sound effects when you introduce the actors and titles. The font you have used is sometimes quite hard to read.

4.             I like the long shot of the street it gives us a good idea where the setting is, i also like the close ups, some of the shots show us what type of movie it is which is almost like a detective film.


5.             I really like the different shots However the titles are very fast and a little hard to read and the shots are a little repetitive

6.             Titles are a bit fast but the drawings are good and really tell the story. Sound effects are good and the music is dramatic and fits the drawings.


7.             Titles are quite quick, sound effects and a city and typing, drawings can be quite confusing as cannot see the plot of the story.

8.             Drawings are really clear! titles aren't on for long enough and a lot of writing at once but i like the sound effects they're really atmospheric.


9.             Good sound effects, good drawings, the titles are good but some may need to be longer.

10.          Titles are V nice, could be shown for longer though. Like the drawings!! Even the pram!


11.          Titles were a bit fast, and poor scaling pram = car

12.          The camera shot look good because there is a range of angles, pictures were clear and were very good. It was clear what genre film this was as the music helped to show this. The font wasn't very fitting


13.          Really nice sound affects and good background sound, effective overall.

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